Peer Review of Summary-1(By Kayla)

1. What do you like best about your peer's summary? (Why? How might he or she do more of it?) I think Kayla got a really good job. Her content is very clear and logical. I love this part.
2. Is it clear what is being summarized? (i.e. Did your peer list the source, and cite it correctly?) I think it’s very clear. She mentions all points. Her summary is so organized.
3. Is the thesis of the original essay clear in the summary? (If not, write out what you think that thesis is.) Yes, the thesis of the original essay is totally reflected to her summary.
4. If you have read the original source, did you identify the same thesis? (If not, how does it differ?) Yes, I think I can identify the same thesis.
5. Did your peer miss any key points from his or her summary? (If so, what are they?) For her article, she mentioned “Before his plan, he received a telegram telling him his father had passed away, and willed his possessions to his son. He discovered the Bible when he back home with sadness and regret”. I think she has to tell the reader he went back home immediately and then develop the bible.
6. Did your peer include any of his own opinions in his or her summary? (If so, what are they?) No, I think Kayla follows the original article to write the essay.

7. Did your peer include any unimportant details in his or her summary? (If so, what are they?) No, I think every sentence in her summary is the key points.

8. Were any points in the summary lost? (If so, where and how might it be fixed? Why do you think it might be important?) Yes, for her article, she mentioned “Before his plan, he received a telegram telling him his father had passed away, and willed his possessions to his son. He discovered the Bible when he back home with sadness and regret”. In my opinion, I think she should tell us the man go back to check the possession. She mentioned his father willed his possession and then he discovered the Bible. That will be a little bit weird.

Summary2

The story goes that a father punished his three-year-old daughter for wasting a roll wrapping paper. The little girl brought the present to her father in the Christmas morning. He was so angry when he found the box was empty. He yelled at her. The little girl looked up at him and cried. She told him she blew kisses into the box. The man was crushed and begged for her forgiveness. In the end, the man kept the gold box by his bed for years and he would take out a lovely kiss. He will remember the love of his child who had put inside till forever..

Summary 1

A young man had admire a sports car and told his father that he wanted to get one in the graduation day. When the graduation day was coming, his father gave him a, leather-bound Bible. The young man was so angry and disappointed. He stormed out of his home, leaving Bible. After many years, the young man was successful in the business and his family, but he received a telegram telling him his father had died and leaved something with his son. He went back his house and feel so sadness and regret. He found his father’s important papers and saw the “Bible”. He cried and opened the Bible. He developed that his father underlined a verse, Matt 7:11. As he read those words, a car key dropped from the back of the Bible. It had a tag with the dealer’s name and the date is his graduation, and the words “PAID IN FULL”.

My summary~"English-teaching posts are military alternatives"

The National Conscription Administration is recruiting young men with foreign university degrees to teach English in remote-area schools as part an alternative to military service. The past two years were a trial period. The administration has decided to generally promote the program this year. Participants will be sent to elementary schools in remote areas to teach English. The program has been successful. The program aims to young men who begin military service, or who will graduate this year from a foreign school, to return to Taiwan to fulfill their commitments. For men who graduated last year, 14 categories of alternative military service are available. Those with specialized skills may choose to serve in non-combat areas to maximize their potential.

Favorite Comedy Movie-Bruce Almighty (Final)~

“Bruce Almighty”(王牌天神) is an impressive film in my mind. I saw it 3 years ago. It was a fantastic comedy movie. I repeated it again and again and I always laughed when I saw “Bruce Almighty. Although this is a comedy movie, there are some issues and inspirations concealing in the plot. This is not only a funny film but also an educational movie.
Bruce was a TV news reporter. He took charge off covering news all over the world. He always complained his life and God. One day, Bruce was contacted by God and endowed with almighty powers to prove that he could do a better job. He could do anything except control people’s love and free will. Bruce abused his power and endanged his relationship with his girlfriend Grace Connelly because of his selfish. In the end, Bruce realized the true love. He asked God for taking control of his life and he rebirth. Finally, he fell in love with Grace again and they had no more argument.
This movie makes me touched. I laughed at the beginning, but I almost cried in the end. In the movie, God told us a truth. “Separating the water is magical; helping drug addict quit the drug is a miracle". I think Bruce Almighty is trying to say this motto. We usually want to get more power or purchase something worthless. Actually, the miracle is made by ourselves, but we always ignore it. This is a humorous film and I also realize true love after I saw this movie. I expect that I can find more miracles in the future because only love can enrich the world.

Material Classes in the Self-Haul Waste Stream

This chart shows the percentage of Material Classes in the Self-Haul Waste Stram. As can be seen, Construction & Demolition included 51% material classed in the Self-Haul Waste Stram. Further, Other organic is number2, including 20.78%.on the other hand, Glass included 10.64% in the Material Classes. Plastic included 5.55% in the chart and other special included 4.86%.

Glass,Mixed Residue, and Household

Hazardous are the lowest percent in the

Self-Haul. They included 1.03%, 0.24%

, and 0.13%.

Favorite Comedy Movie-Bruce Almighty Draft2~

“Bruce Almighty”(王牌天神) is a impressive film in my mind. I had seen it 3 years ago. It was a fantastic comedy movie. I repeat it again and again and I was always laughing when I saw “Bruce Almighty. Although this is a comedy movie, there are some issues and inspirations concealing in the plot. This is not only a funny film but also an educational movie.
Bruce was a TV news reporter. He was responsible for covering other people all over the world. He always complained his life and God. One day, Bruce was contacted by god and endowed with almighty powers to prove that he could do a better job. He could do anything except control people’s love and free will. Bruce abused his power and endangers his relationship with girlfriend Grace Connelly because of his selfish. In the end, Bruce realized that the true love. He asked God for taking control of his life and he rebirth. Finally, he was falling love with Grace again and they had no more argument.
This movie makes me touched. I was laughing at the beginning but I am almost crying in the end. In the movie, God told us a truth. “Separating the water is magical; helping drug addict quit the drug is a miracle". I think Bruce Almighty is trying to say this motto. We usually want to get more power or purchase something worthless. Actually, the miracle is making by ourselves, but we always ignored it. This is a humorous film and I also realize true love after I saw this movie. I expect that I can develop more miracles in the future because only love can enrich the world.

Favorite Comedy Movie

“Bruce Almighty”(王牌天神) is impressive film in my mind. I had seen it 3 years ago. It was a fantastic comedy movie. I repeat again and again and I am always laughing when I saw “Bruce Almighty. Although this is a comedy movie, there are some issues and inspirations concealing in the plot. This is not only a funny film but also an educational movie.

Bruce is a TV news reporter. He is responsible to cover other people all over the world. He always complains his life and God. One day, Bruce is contacted by god and endowed with almighty powers to prove that he can do a better job. He can do anything but control people’s love and free will. Bruce abuses his power and endangers his relationship with girlfriend Grace Connelly because of his selfish. In the end, Bruce realized that the truth of love. He asks God to take control of his life and he get rebirth. Finally, he is falling love with Grace again and no more argument.
This movie makes me touched. I am laughing at the beginning but I am almost crying in the end. In the movie, God tell us a truth. “Separating the water is magical; helping drug addict quitting the drug is a miracle". I think Bruce Almighty is trying to say this motto. We usually want to get more power or purchase something worthless. Actually, we ignore that the miracle is making by ourselves. This is a humorous film and I also realize love of truth after I saw this movie. I expect that I can develop more miracles in the future because only love can enrich the world.

assignment~May13~

1.According to simulation studies, in some circusmstances passive smoking may lead to some physical problem like cancer.


2. According to simulation studies, in some circussmstances the recycling may solve the problems of the wast disposal.

3. According to simulation studies, in some circussmstances the alcohol will lead peple to become violent.

4. According to simulation studies, in some circussmstances the use of physical exercise may reduce certain types of physical problems of depression.

5.According to the report, in some situations attractive people may have more favorable personal attributes than unattractive person.

6. In some circustances economic sanctions may be ineffevtive.

7. In some situations, deep tunnels could safer and less vulnerable to erthquake shaking than are shallow tunnels.

8. According to the legend, privated schools might provide a better education than do public schools.

assignment

Last year all overseas students completed University Registration forms. It is certain that all students finished University Library Membership Application forms. Students should get National Health Service Registration. All students accomplished International Student Identity Card Application forms. few students finished Accommodation Office Application forms. Students almost had ever achieved Magzine Subscription forms.